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Wednesday, 24 October 2018

Show Not Tell

WALT : Show Not Tell. This Week Room 6 Has Been Practicing to Write Using Show Not Tell to Describe a Certain Feeling.
What I Enjoyed Doing Was Using This Type of Writing.
What I Found Hard Was Finding the Right Words to Describe This Feeling.
Next Time I Will Add More Sentences and Make Them Longer.

I Walk Up On Stage, Sweaty and Dizzy. The Room Went Quiet, All Eyes Glaring At Me. I Spoke Out Loud Into the Microphone. My Mouth Was Dry and My Vision Went Fuzzy. I Continue My Speech, Saying Each Word Carefully.
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1 comment:

  1. Anonymous24 October 2018 at 09:38

    Hi,Alex
    I really enjoyed reading your piece of writing. I like how you used very descriptive words in your writing. My guess is that your feeling is nervous.Maybe next time you could re-read your writing and don't use capital letters at the beginning of each word.Other then that you did a great job. Keep up the awesome work.

    - Atalina

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