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Friday, 29 March 2019

Pig the Pug Falls!

WALT : Know how to write a newspaper report.


Pig the Pug falls!


On the 4th of March 2019, Pig the Pug fell out of an open window and broke all his bones.
But was this an accident or was it on purpose? Trevor, who was in the room at the time, said
that Pig the Pug climbed an unstable pile of toys. He then lost his balanced and fell out of
a window.


Trevor
“I’m Innocent!” Trevor said. “He was hogging all the toys! So then he made a pile of the toys, lost his
balanced and fell out of an open window.” Why was the window open and where were the
owners at the time?


Pig the Pug
“He pushed me! Trevor pushed me!” Pig yelled so the whole World can hear. “He’s not Innocent at all!
He did it on purpose!” While he was yelling, Police were checking camera footage to see what really
happened. Unfortunately the cameras were broken and glitched.

Since the Police had no proof that Trevor pushed Pig the Pug out of the window they let Trevor go.
Will we ever know what really happened to Pig the Pug? Is Trevor Innocent or is he guilty?

2 comments:

  1. Hey Alex I like your story but in the beginning it says "On the 4th of march 2019 pig the pug falls out the window" Falls out like its going to happen so i think it should be fell out and "breaks all his bones" shouldn't it be broke anyway keep up the good work Alex
    -Jimmy

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    1. Hi Jimmy,
      Thank you so much for your feedback! I will update my blog and I will keep this in mind the next time I do my writing. Again, thank you for your feedback.

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