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Tuesday, 22 August 2017

Awesome Family

WALT: Write an interesting poem about our own Family.
Awesome Family
I think my family is unique and awesome.
My busy bee Mum is good at cooking food and making the house clean.
My fun Dad is good at having fun and helping with the soccer team.
My silent sister likes reading Geronimo Stilton books and is good at being quiet as a mouse.
I am good at maths and playing games in the house.

Even though we are doing different things we are still a Family and we love each other.
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3 comments:

  1. Anonymous26 October 2017 at 10:02

    Hi Alex, this is a very descriptive poem about your family. It created a great picture in my head. It has a good rhyme too. Looking forward to the next poem you do.

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  2. Anonymous26 October 2017 at 11:50

    Hi Alex, this is a very descriptive poem about your family. It created a great picture in my head. It has a good rhyme too. sorry I have no feedback for you.

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  3. Anonymous8 December 2017 at 12:13

    Hi Alex this is a very good poem. It looks like you don't have any problems or any mistakes.

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