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Monday, 26 June 2017

Winter Poem

WALT: Write a poem about winter using strong verbs.



Icy Cold Winter Days
Winter is a time of the year
when frost forms everywhere.
The days are cold, the fire is on.
The animals sleep, the leaves are gone.
People ice skate on the ice.
We stay inside and enjoy hot chocolate that’s nice.
Our parents are splashing water on the car.
People are sliding on the ice afar.
Our families are hiding under the rugs
Keeping warm,  eating chicken soup and getting hugs.
The warm days are left behind,
But it’s warm inside so I don ‘t mind.
For winter is the time when I
sleep in and dream of warm mince pies.
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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous5 July 2017 at 17:17

    Hi Alex,
    I really enjoyed your poem about icy cold winter days. It paints a great picture in my head. I like the sentence about hiding under the rugs.

    Graham

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    1. Anonymous8 August 2017 at 10:53

      Thank you Graham that makes me feel really happy.

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